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Friday, November 25

  1. page Romeo & Juliet edited ... Krystah's review: After reading this wiki i have a clear understanding of what this graphic no…
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    Krystah's review: After reading this wiki i have a clear understanding of what this graphic novel is about. why didnt you use a picture? It would have been nice to see what the context of the book looks like and the type of artwork that is used. I found a few small gramatical errors, but you covered everything that was required.
    review number 1 this is a good review and all the hiber links are in thare and yea
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    that you meaningmean a footnote
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  2. page Ultimate Spider-man edited ultimate spider-man vol 1: Story by: Bill Jemas & Brian Michael Bendis Mrs B: Please complete…
    ultimate spider-man vol 1: Story by: Bill Jemas & Brian Michael Bendis
    Mrs B: Please complete your work.
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  3. page The Ultimate Spider-Man. Vol.1 edited ... {http://spiderfan.org/comics/images/ultimate_spiderman/001.jpg} peer review #1 leah-good job…
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    peer review #1 leah-good job! you told me the plot without giving it all away. you have some spelling and grammar errors but too many, i could still read it. could use a little more detail and hyperlinks.
    Mrs B: Good use of the introduction to help a reader understand your review. The summary was with a few errors - so try using word processing, use spell and grammar check, then copy and paste into the wiki. Small errors take away from your good insights.
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  4. page The Ugly Duckling edited ... Lexie: This is an awesome review! You did a great job. You had all of the important things nee…
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    Lexie: This is an awesome review! You did a great job. You had all of the important things needed for this review, Except it would have been nice if you told me more about the other characters in this book if there was anymore but other than that you did a great job of explaining what the story was about and what you liked about it. but all and all it was a great review.
    Wilfred: This was a great review, i really liked your sentences and how yu described the main character and the setting. But yu could have told more about the other characters. this sound like a really good book the way you describe it. ill read the book if i ever get a chance.
    Mrs B: Thank you for having an introductory paragraph to your review - this makes a big difference. You were also honest about your general dislike for graphic novels - so this helps a reader trust your opinion of this book - whether you knew that it would have this effect, it does. The information about the award was interesting. Why did you change your font at the end? Good work!
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  5. page The Hobbit Graphic Novel edited ... Background can blur together. (annoying) Review #1- Kyla. Wow. This was an amazing review! Th…
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    Background can blur together. (annoying)
    Review #1- Kyla. Wow. This was an amazing review! There was all the right content and the graphics show a lot about the book. Your opinion about the book was very strong and your detail was very good. You did a very good job because i want to read the Hobbit now! I liked how you made it so you were "telling it to a friend". The only thing was during the plot I kinda got lost, I just got confuzed about what happened. I still liked it. It was very well done.
    Mrs B: I found your details supporting your opinion - which is useful for me if I decided to read this book. The comments about the artwork helps to understand how effectively the creators have used subtle visual enhancements within the telling of the story. I get a feeling of how the book "looks" somewhat like a movie - as a good graphic novel should. Even if I know the story of The Hobbit, I might be attracted to looking at this version because of your very complete review. Excellent work!
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  6. page SPIDERMAN Vol.2 edited ... Paul: I really enjoyed this review! It gave me a great idea what the storyline was like! Also …
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    Paul: I really enjoyed this review! It gave me a great idea what the storyline was like! Also the design was easy to understand and not overwhelming. The pictures were very nice and suited the theme, but didn't give anything away. The sentences were engaging and besides now wanting to read this book myself, I just enjoyed reading the review! Maybe you could talk a little about how this book translated the classic idea Spiderman differently than other books/movies! Even that is a "maybe" GREAT JOB!
    Jaydon: i like this review, the word and the discription that you use is awsome. i also liked how you told us some stuff about his jbd.
    Mrs B: I had to read carefully to know that the image on the right is the one that goes with this book - so consider carefully how you organize your information. I also became a bit confused when you talked about the plotline - so ensure that someone unfamaliar with the book can follow your summary easily. You included the information required and overall created a useful review of this graphic novel.
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  7. page Smile edited ... Paul: This is a truly excellent review! All the important aspects are talked about and I feel …
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    Paul: This is a truly excellent review! All the important aspects are talked about and I feel I know what the book would be like! I get a taste of the story but there are no spoilers! Also, I think it was very important that you added the fact the book was good, but a bit young, that is important information! Great engaging paragraphs, it was a really great review to read! Also I like how you gave a link to more info about Raina Telgemeirer! Maybe you could add in a picture of the art so we can see for ourself what it looks like?
    Maddy: Krystah,Krystah,Krystah. This is a great review Paul said a lot of things I was going to say. I think you should have added art to it added color to it LOLOLOLOLOL. Your review made me want to read this book. You did a good job.
    Mrs B: I agree with the feedback given by Paul and Maddy - a bit more colour and the use of another hyperlink would enhance your strong summary. I appreciated how you wrote the review - with good details and with your perception regarding the intended audience. Do you think that the author likes stories related to teeth? Just wondering...
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    12:44 pm
  8. page shackelton edited ... Peer Review 2: Haxstyn. there were many gramatical errors, and poor character discription but…
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    Peer Review 2: Haxstyn.
    there were many gramatical errors, and poor character discription but it is very intreging. It could use photos of the authors as well as a hyperlink.
    Mrs B: Not much comment here about the illustrations and the conveying of ideas as a graphic novel. I suggest that you use word processing to compose, check your work and then copy and paste your writing into the wiki as your small errors take away from the over quality of the work. Good use of details, and perhaps write more for each paragraph.
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    12:38 pm

Thursday, November 24

  1. page Runaways edited ... Review 1-Brendan This review gave me a good understanding of this book. You should have added…
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    Review 1-Brendan
    This review gave me a good understanding of this book. You should have added a picture to give more of a visual in the readers mind. Even though it doesn't contain much writing it still gives me a good view of the book. I liked the part about them getting chased by the cops.
    Mrs B: I would like to see more information - about the novel, the artwork, hyperlinks, a rating etc. Please refer to the assignment to ensure that you are completing all that has been requested.
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  2. page Romeo and Juilet edited ... it was a good review but I found that you seemed to repeat the information more than once.Also…
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    it was a good review but I found that you seemed to repeat the information more than once.Also there is a few spelling and grammar mistakes.I liked that the font was big.
    TEIGAN
    Mrs B: I am wondering why you did not insert more images directly into the review rather than as a hyperlink - perhaps a link to a website about Shakespeare or a wikipedia entry would be more helpful. You did not comment about the artwork in detail which might be useful to know. You summarized the plot well without giving too much away.
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